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Post by megamanx on Dec 7, 2004 23:22:08 GMT
One night this fisher guy was fishing in a lake.It started to get dark,so he went to his car,but it wouldn't start."Oh,darn"he thought."I guess I'll have to stay the night in the abandoned hotel."Now,the history of this hotel is grim:A man was found dead in his room with no bullet holes,knife marks,anything,except the whole bed was soaked in blood.That's why the hotel closed up.As the man entered the old hotel,he was about to lay down for the night,when he heard a THUMP on the stairs.He froze.He heard more THUMPs,then the sound of a body dragging across the floor upstairs and started to see blood drip from the ceiling.He started to back toward the door.Then he heard footsteps,and saw a shadow on the wall in front of the stairs.Then he heard this:"WHY DO YOU BOTHER MY PEACEFUL SLUMBER IN THIS BUILDING?DO YOU,LIKE THAT FOOLISH GIRL,WANT PROOF OF MY EXISTANCE SO YOU CAN BECOME RICH?!!?"The man's throat was dry,body frozen on the spot."YOU WILL LEAVE OR DIE,AND WITNESS THE HORROR OF MANKIND,OF WHICH KILLED ME!!!!"He started to run out the door,but it was slammed shut and he couldn't get it open.He turned back around,back to the door.The shadow was gone.He turned to his left,then his right,which was the last mistake of his life.On his right he saw the most horrifying figure he'd ever seen.It spoke once again."GOODBYE,MORTAL SCUM!!"The police never found out anything other then that,except on the recorder found in the man's pocket,there was the sound,of ripping flesh and a man screaming.They found the house because a fisherman who went to that lake the next day found blood stains on the grass.The police found 2 dead bodies in the upstairs closet,a male and a female.They did not,however,find the zombie of the man who had been murdered,so long ago. Well?whaddyou think?  |
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Post by JackOLantern on Dec 11, 2004 16:58:40 GMT
Not bad.. not bad at all!  PS MegamanX, is it me, or are you usually on the same thread as me? I'm probably paranoid, though.. |
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Post by megamanx on Dec 11, 2004 18:23:46 GMT
oh JackOLantern,you registered!but you're right,are you like my conscience or something?thanks for the comment though ;D
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Post by JackOLantern on Dec 12, 2004 19:44:46 GMT
U know, I might have been a conscience in a previous life.. Hobbes says he was a cookie once.. that explains a lot...
Anyhoo, you going to churn out another ghost story or what? I would write 1 but I'm using my available imagination to write a novel...
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Post by megamanx on Dec 12, 2004 20:24:12 GMT
You want another?Hmmm....lemme think.....ok i got one its not really scary as it is creepy. One night this couple was out on a date at a theater.When the movie was over,they went out to her car and she drove him home.When they got home,they said goodnight,yada yada,and then she drove away.When he got inside his house,his parents asked who he was out with.He told them her name,and they looked at him really weird.He said it again.His mom said "That girl was murdered last week."He said that is must have been some other girl.The next morning,he decided to take a walk to her house.He walked along a road,not the road they were on last night.He saw something large by a tree,so he ran toward and saw that a car had ran into a tree and even though it wasn't burning,he saw the ashes from a fire on the ground next to the car.Someone was in it.He pulled the body out and discovered that it was the girl he'd been with the night before.He figured she'd run into a tree on the way to somewhere,but she wasn't breathing.He started to cry,but then he noticed something.He remembered that after last night's movie,she had stuck the ticket in her pocket.She was wearing the same pants she had on yesterday,only there was no ticket.It couldn't of fallen out,he thought,because she had zipper pockets and the pocket was zipped up.That meant that she had never been to the movies with him,and his mom was right.He had gone to the movies with a ghost.   OK its not very good but its the best i can come up with right now! |
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Post by JackOLantern on Dec 12, 2004 20:52:49 GMT
Hey its good! Don't be such a pessimist!
O by the way, u dont have 2 but could you write one with cookies in it?
*coff coff*random*coff coff*
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Post by megamanx on Dec 12, 2004 21:22:25 GMT
hey thanks i didn't think it was that good....ok I'll write one with cookies in it
In commeoration of my good pal JackOLantern
One night,this family of 4(a mom,dad,and 2 boy sons) was eating dinner.Both boys had cookies for dessert.After everyone had gone to bed,one boy started to feel queasy.The next morning they found that boy dead on his matress.His brother then also started feeling queasy.He threw up in his brother's room,but instead of puke coming out of his mouth,a ghost that they could see(!)came out and said,"Why have you eaten the poison cookies?Are you a mortal who tempts fate and lives to die?If so,I will be your murderer."The whole family was frozen."Yes?Then say goodbye to your precious life,mortals!"
The police found their bodies all in that boy's room,their mouth stuffed with,after careful anaylisis,cookies that were filled witha dangerous war toxin.The lifeform that put them in there,is still unknown to this day.
I was making this one up quickly,the first one i wrote is a true story,the others are fake.
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Post by JackOLantern on Dec 13, 2004 6:12:08 GMT
YAY MURDEROUS COOKIES!!! ;D ;D ;D Thanx! Anyway I've finished my novel so I'll do one about... err... what should I do it about |
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Post by megamanx on Dec 13, 2004 20:53:40 GMT
YAY MURDEROUS COOKIES!!! ;D ;D ;D Thanx! Anyway I've finished my novel so I'll do one about... err... what should I do it about Murderous Cookies?I never thought of it that way... do one about..hmmm..maybe GHOSTS?  |
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Post by JackOLantern on Dec 14, 2004 5:56:03 GMT
Ok enough with da sarcasm already!!  But really, I cant think of da setting or anything...  |
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